I have returned
Guess what?
I'M BACK!!!!! * Deep breath* ahhhhhh loveliness.
I won't say much right now but I'm wondering if I should even begin to comment on the comments of the previous "post". I think I will just leave it alone and move on.
Okay so here is one poem that I wrote back in September. I think I'm gonna change some things but here it is in it's original form. This poem is hopefully going to be a song soon. It's in the process right now. If only I could play guitar it be awesome! Still the piano is working fine by itself.
Sleep won't come to me
this midnight life won't let me be
So weary I want to weep
but I can't fall asleep.
My gaze drifts to the skies
star shine on my sleepless eyes
I see the man in the moon
night has reached it's full bloom
I'm wide awake
and I want to shake
this sleepless mind
I want to find
some peace
A warmness spreads over my eyes
they slowly close before I realize
that nothing's ever what it seems
I'm sleeping in my dreams.
I'M BACK!!!!! * Deep breath* ahhhhhh loveliness.
I won't say much right now but I'm wondering if I should even begin to comment on the comments of the previous "post". I think I will just leave it alone and move on.
Okay so here is one poem that I wrote back in September. I think I'm gonna change some things but here it is in it's original form. This poem is hopefully going to be a song soon. It's in the process right now. If only I could play guitar it be awesome! Still the piano is working fine by itself.
Sleep won't come to me
this midnight life won't let me be
So weary I want to weep
but I can't fall asleep.
My gaze drifts to the skies
star shine on my sleepless eyes
I see the man in the moon
night has reached it's full bloom
I'm wide awake
and I want to shake
this sleepless mind
I want to find
some peace
A warmness spreads over my eyes
they slowly close before I realize
that nothing's ever what it seems
I'm sleeping in my dreams.
posted by Bree @ 8:04 AM
6 Comments:
At 9:54 AM,
Anonymous said…
oh the sweetness of salt
At 12:56 PM,
Feanor said…
That's really cool, I love it. And I can exactly sympathize with where that was written from. I so wish I could put my poems to music, do you think you could help me?
At 1:02 PM,
Feanor said…
One thing about this poem though, poems of this nature should (I think)always be rectified, even if its not ok yet, you know it will be, in the end. So don't stop on a final note of empty confusion, unless this poem is just for poetry's sake, which I don't think you intend.
At 6:43 PM,
Bree said…
Spiffy .........WHA?
At 7:12 PM,
ferretlover said…
Do not worry bree,I was one of the church people he is refering to.
groovy girl :)
At 10:43 PM,
Bree said…
the "wha?" was directed at the comment about "I know who you wanted to see there. I think... "
Feanor: I might be able to help...possibly...couldn't hurt to try.
HI AMANDA!
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